The Strange case of Dr.Jekyll and Mr.Hyde - Character analysis of Character essay

So I'll be posting my essays on here now and this is the first I ever wrote about Jekyll & Hyde and sadly I don't have a file of this anymore, so I'll put pictures of the actual paper with all the markings and errors.

(picture 1 is lost, I'll find it soon, sorry)

So on that 3rd page, you  can see some badly written extracts of analysis. That is done after we got our papers back and were told to try and make one part different and better.